Warrior Princess

This was good. Not great, perhaps, but good. I think it feels a little rushed; I would take a little more time to illustrate the emotions of both characters. But ...

Oh my gosh!! This was funny! Short and sweet. Well I don't really know what to say about it, because there's not really much to critique....very nice! Yay!! Write on, ...

OH MY GOSH BEST SONG EVER!!!!!!!!!! GO YWS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HO-LY-CRAP. This was freakin beautiful. Perhaps not the most refined stylistically, but it had a certain raw power, like stream of consciousness. What can I say? Beautiful.

Wow! I didn't think it would be that well liked. Thanks everyone--especially Flower Child, because I know how hard it is for her to sincerely compliment me on anything. :) ...

Thank you, everyone! I'm psyched that you liked my poem. I realize the syllables get a little unmanageable here and there, but you know, such is life. To LavenderBlue: a ...

Hey! Street art is art too, thank you very much! Haha. I liked this poem. It was a bit bland, rather obvious, but definitely full of truth. I would've preferred ...

Oh my gosh wow i didnt expect such great feedback! your reviews literally made my day. Im so glad u liked it. THank you so much!

haha that was great. i hate to just repeat what everybody else is saying but it would make a pretty darn good rap verse lol. tell your little bro hi ...

Thanks! the funny thing is, I wrote every single one of those while taking the ACT test because I finished really early and was bored lol. im glad u like ...

aw you guys are too nice. muchas gracias! i love the sea and it inspires many of my poems. this was actually composed while standing in the breaking surf and ...

Okay that totally made no sense and that was exactly why I liked it! The punctuation was bit emily dickinsonish, and I can't say i prefer that style, but to ...

A word to the critics: I didn't write this for you; I wrote it for the person I'm speaking to in the poem. And he has it framed on his ...

Wow okay. This poem confused me just a tad, but oh well. It was poignant nevertheless, and gee, that person deserves a good whack in the head with his own ...

This was a good, beautiful poem, and I enjoyed it.